by David L. Ackiss, Professor of English
First published February 1999, Revised January 06, 2005
English Department
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Austen crafted her novel with exquisite care, loading almost every paragraph with significance. I have often wished I could sit with students as they read this novel, answering their questions and offering analysis and comment. In what follows, I experiment with a kind of running commentary on the text, in a way trying to imitate what I think as I read. Some notes are merely explanatory while others offer critical analysis. By the way, the commentary sometimes draws on what comes after this passage in the novel, so it offers interpretations inaccessible during a first reading.
Before the chapter begins, Jane has fallen ill during her visit with Mr. Bingley's sisters, having to spend what is eventually five nights. Her sister Elizabeth, anxious for Jane's health, walks three miles in wet November weather to be with her beloved sister. The chapter describes the conversation during Elizabeth's first night with the Netherfield party: Mr. Bingley, Miss Bingley, Mr. and Mrs. Hurst, and Mr. Darcy.
I have had to add extra white space between the paragraphs of Austen's text. In the commentary, I identify the speaker for each line of dialogue, even when it is obvious. In some of Austen's dialogue, there are so few speaker tags that one must pay careful attention to tell who is talking.
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Pride and Prejudice |
Commentary |
VOLUME
I, CHAPTER VIII |
Volume 1, Chapter 8 |
At
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The two ladies are Mrs. Hurst and Miss Bingley.
Dinner is around six or seven, supper later. People of this class often kept fairly
late hours and rose late in the morning - so late that "morning" sometimes means
"during daylight" or before dusk..
To "abuse" someone is
to speak ill of her. |
"She
has nothing, in short, to recommend her, but being an excellent walker. I shall never
forget her appearance this morning. She really looked almost wild." |
Mrs. (Louisa) In Austen, "morning"
seems to mean during daylight hours before the evening meal. |
"She
did indeed, Louisa. I could hardly keep my countenance. Very nonsensical to come at all!
Why must she be scampering about the
country, because her sister had a cold? Her hair so untidy, so blowsy!" |
Miss (Caroline) Bingley. She can
hardly keep a straight face. Why would a lady sacrifice her coiffure for a sister
with a cold? The text shows rather than tells how shallow these
women are. Note that this is a woman speaking to her own sister about how little a
sister's illness weighs against being ladylike and immaculately coifed. Austen again
explores the tension between lady as bodiless, inert doll and woman as potent and active
being. Darcy has better sense than to assent wholly to this notion of woman,
but we will soon see him caught between these conflicting images of how a woman ought to
conduct herself, especially when he thinks of his own sister. |
"Yes,
and her petticoat; I hope you saw her petticoat, six inches deep in mud, I am absolutely
certain; and the gown which had been let down to hide it not doing its office." |
Mrs. |
"Your
picture may be very exact, Louisa," said Bingley; "but this was all lost upon
me. I thought Miss Elizabeth Bennet looked remarkably well, when she came into the room
this morning. Her dirty petticoat quite escaped my notice." |
Mr. (Charles) Bingley. Charles is a man of
feeling, and Austen wants us to like him. He is also not so acute an observer as
Darcy. |
"You observed it, Mr. Darcy, I am sure," said
Miss Bingley, "and I am inclined to think that you would not wish to see your sister
make such an exhibition." |
Miss Bingley. She is appealing to his weak
side - his pride. |
"Certainly
not." |
Mr. (Fitzwilliam) Darcy. Miss Bingley
cleverly catches Darcy in a dilemma. He wants his sister to uphold the standards of
strict decorum that |
"To
walk three miles, or four miles, or five miles, or whatever it is, above her ancles in
dirt, and alone, quite alone! what could she mean by it? It seems to me to shew an
abominable sort of conceited independence, a most country town indifference to
decorum." |
Miss Bingley. Alone! The
implicit standard, that a lady should never go out unattended, reveals a world where the
woman is always a sexual object, always vulnerable prey. This covert but ubiquitous
sense of threat curtails women's freedom, like her petticoats and her gentlewoman's
role. Freedom for |
"It
shews an affection for her sister that is very pleasing," said Bingley. |
Mr. Bingley. In defending |
"I
am afraid, Mr. Darcy," observed Miss Bingley in a half whisper, "that this
adventure has rather affected your admiration of her fine eyes." |
Miss Bingley. She cannot resist getting in
a dig at |
"Not
at all," he replied; "they were brightened by the exercise." -- A short
pause followed this speech, and Mrs. Hurst began again. |
Mr. Darcy. Though some readers complain
that the stiff manners of Austen's day make hers a pale, passionless, arid world, they
overlook the direct and almost bruising way Darcy and Elizabeth sometimes speak.
Darcy's reply shows his willingness to wound Miss Bingley if she persists in her
teasing. Austen lets us know that Miss Bingley's designs upon Darcy are hopeless,
though Miss Bingley remains in the dark. In this pause, which Austen takes pains to
convey, Miss Bingley feels her wound. |
"I
have an excessive regard for Jane Bennet, she is really a very sweet girl, and I wish with
all my heart she were well settled. But with such a father and mother, and such low
connections, I am afraid there is no chance of it." |
Mrs. Hurst. "Well settled" means
well married. What she really means, with all her heart, is that she does not
want her brother to marry Jane. The higher her brother's wife's social standing, the
higher her own. Though it is not entirely clear
until later, she is quite right in a way. Jane's having "such" a mother
and father are a real threat to Jane's well-being. Her mother is rude, selfish,
materialistic - a boor (though she loves her daughters deeply after her own
fashion). Her father, though sensible and gentlemanly, chooses ease and irony
over an active and engaged family life. He ought to demand more sense, civility, and
maturity of his children's mother. He ought to treat her with more respect. He
ought to exert himself more as a parent, too, especially for the younger girls who seem so
idle and silly. He says as much later in the novel. |
"I
think I have heard you say, that their uncle is an attorney in Meryton." |
Miss Bingley. An attorney is employed on
other people's business and, therefore, possesses a lower status than a gentleman who is
concerned only with his own. Meryton is a country backwater. |
"Yes;
and they have another, who lives somewhere near |
A commercial district in |
"That
is capital," added her sister, and they both laughed heartily. |
Miss Bingley. Aimed at Charles and Darcy,
this laugh is meant to put Jane and Elizabeth safely out of reach down the social
ladder. Of course, Austen wants us to scorn and laugh at their outrageous
snobbery. |
"If
they had uncles enough to fill all |
Mr. Bingley. While one admires his
warm and simple heart, Bingley seems naive, or so Austen wants us to think.
The reality is that economic and social status shapes our lives. Even in our
egalitarian age when, in theory, love conquers all and Cinderella can marry the prince,
the reality is that few of us ever marry someone whose parents are a lot richer or poorer
than our own. Of course, Pride and Prejudice is a Cinderella story
and militates against this stern limitation on love. |
"But
it must very materially lessen their chance of marrying men of any consideration in the
world," replied Darcy. |
Mr. Darcy. He is
right. This is the way the world is. But not the way Austen thinks it
should be. |
To
this speech Bingley made no answer; but his sisters gave it their hearty assent, and
indulged their mirth for some time at the expense of their dear friend's vulgar relations. |
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With
a renewal of tenderness, however, they repaired to her room on leaving the dining-parlour,
and sat with her till summoned to coffee. She was still very poorly, and Elizabeth would
not quit her at all till late in the evening, when she had the comfort of seeing her
asleep, and when it appeared to her rather right than pleasant that she should go down
stairs herself. On entering the drawing-room she found the whole party at loo, and was
immediately invited to join them; but suspecting them to be playing high she declined it,
and making her sister the excuse, said she would amuse herself for the short time she
could stay below with a book. Mr. Hurst looked at her with astonishment. |
To Jane's room. He is always astonished by
Elizabeth, poor dolt. |
"Do
you prefer reading to cards?" said he; "that is rather singular." |
Mr. Hurst. He says "rather
singular" while today one might say "really weird." |
"Miss
Eliza Bennet," said Miss Bingley, "despises cards. She is a great reader and has
no pleasure in anything else." |
Miss Bingley. This is a
surprisingly sharp, unfounded attack, though superficially it sounds like praise of |
"I
deserve neither such praise nor such censure," cried |
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"In
nursing your sister I am sure you have pleasure," said Bingley; "and I hope it
will soon be increased by seeing her quite well." |
Mr. Bingley. Presumably Charles does not
like his sister's manners and seeks to make amends for her rudeness. |
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"And
I wish my collection were larger for your benefit and my own credit; but I am an idle
fellow, and though I have not many, I have more than I ever look into." |
Mr. Bingley. The ensuing conversation about
books is meant to offer insight into Darcy's character and status, partly in contrast to
Bingley's. |
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"I
am astonished," said Miss Bingley, "that my father should have left so small a
collection of books. -- What a delightful library you have at Pemberley, Mr. Darcy!" |
Miss Bingley. Her father was a businessman,
not a scholar. Pemberley is Darcy's family estate. It serves almost as a
character in the novel, so Austen here begins to develop this "character."
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"It
ought to be good," he replied, "it has been the work of many generations." |
Mr. Darcy. Darcy is not among the newly
rich. Old money bestows higher status than new money. Though most of this
regard for old money or property is a mere construction of status markers, there is a
basis for it in experience: it is alarmingly easy for old money to become no money, for
inherited wealth to be squandered, for an estate to be ruined by the vice, greed,
laziness, or stupidity of its owners. That generations of Darcys have managed Pemberley
well is powerful evidence of their good sense, moral soundness, and dutifulness. |
"And
then you have added so much to it yourself, you are always buying books." |
Miss Bingley. I wonder when the
contemporary phrase "brown nosing" first gained currency? |
"I
cannot comprehend the neglect of a family library in such days as these," |
Mr. Darcy. Part of noblesse oblige,
Darcy's responsibility to his estate is not merely to enjoy its great wealth but to serve
as its caretaker, handing it on to the next generation improved for his having owned
it. While this may seem a strange notion, it has contemporary parallels.
For instance, nowadays many employees feel this loyalty and responsibility to the
corporation or institution for which they work. An estate like Darcy's is an
institution influencing the lives of hundreds of people for generations. Darcy may
feel about his estate somewhat as the CEO of a large corporation feels about his or her
company. With his enormous power, it seems at first glance that the boss can do
anything he chooses . . . in theory. But his choices are ever dictated by the good
of his company. His company controls him about as much as he controls his
company. Many are the powerful executives who are effectively slaves to their
corporations. The cost of power is usually
some sort of bondage. When Darcy mentions "such
days as these," Austen signals that she shares the conviction, common in the Romantic
age, that theirs were extraordinary times blessed with a wealth of important,
groundbreaking literature. |
"Neglect!
I am sure you neglect nothing that can add to the beauties of that noble place. Charles,
when you build your house, I wish it may be half
as delightful as Pemberley." |
Miss Bingley. Austen has her kissing up so
shamelessly for our sakes, hoping to make us laugh. Thanks, Miss Austen. |
"I
wish it may." |
Mr. Bingley. He probably understands that
he lacks the energy, understanding, and capital to develop an estate that rivals Darcy's
Pemberley. |
"But
I would really advise you to make your purchase in that neighbourhood, and take Pemberley
for a kind of model. There is not a finer county in |
Miss Bingley. She will even flatter
Darcy for his county in north central |
"With
all my heart; I will buy Pemberley itself if Darcy will sell it." |
Mr. Bingley. |
"I
am talking of possibilities, Charles." |
Miss Bingley. |
"Upon
my word, Caroline, I should think it more possible to get Pemberley by purchase than by
imitation." |
Mr. Bingley. Charles knows that there is
something about Pemberley that his money cannot buy. Now |
Why does |
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"Is
Miss Darcy much grown since the spring?" said Miss Bingley; "will she be as tall
as I am?" |
Miss Bingley. She seeks to show off her
intimacy with the Darcy family. It is in this chapter that we first learn that Darcy
has a younger sister. She turns out to be about |
"I
think she will. She is now about Miss Elizabeth Bennet's height, or rather taller." |
Mr. Darcy. Note Darcy's yardstick! He is so
conscious of |
"How
I long to see her again! I never met with anybody who delighted me so much. Such a
countenance, such manners, and so extremely accomplished for her age! Her performance on
the piano-forte is exquisite." |
Miss Bingley. Ugh.
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"It
is amazing to me," said Bingley, "how young ladies can have patience to be so
very accomplished as they all are." |
Mr. Bingley. The
"accomplishments" discussed in this passage were pursued in part for their own
sakes but also in part for making women more attractive in the marriage market.
Women's accomplishments were, in general, cultivated to enable her to bring style,
refinement, and decoration to her future husband's home, which is nothing to sneer
at. On the other hand, Austen seems to sneer a little at them in comparison to the
accomplishments Darcy hopes for in a woman. |
"All
young ladies accomplished! My dear Charles, what do you mean?" |
Miss Bingley. Since she has been educated
in a fine private seminary for girls, Miss Bingley's accomplishments are
considerable. She therefore has a lot invested in the notion that accomplishments
distinguish a woman, giving her greater value in the marriage game, greater attractions as
a wife. To think all women accomplished is to devalue the distinctions Caroline is
banking on. |
"Yes
all of them, I think. They all paint tables, cover skreens, and net purses. I scarcely
know any one who cannot do all this, and I am sure I never heard a young lady spoken of
for the first time, without being informed that she was very accomplished." |
Mr. Bingley. They all tole paint,
embroider, and crochet. By these measures, all girls are spoken of as
accomplished. One supposes that Austen is airing one of her pet peeves here,
that her society sometimes calls a woman "accomplished" who possesses a
few such skills. It implies a paltry notion of what women could achieve. |
"Your
list of the common extent of accomplishments," said Darcy, "has too much truth.
The word is applied to many a woman who deserves it no otherwise than by netting a purse,
or covering a skreen. But I am very far from agreeing with you in your estimation of
ladies in general. I cannot boast of knowing more than half a dozen, in the whole range of
my acquaintance, that are really accomplished." |
Mr. Darcy. Darcy's ideas on real
accomplishments reveal how seriously he takes women and their potential.
Though he may strike the reader as a snob here, we should also notice that his sermon on
real accomplishments a few paragraphs later implies that he expects more from his future
wife than ornamentation. He wants equality, companionship, intellect. Paradoxically,
Charles and his sisters betray their relatively middling standard of the ideal
woman. |
"Nor
I, I am sure," said Miss Bingley. |
Miss Bingley. |
"Then,"
observed |
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"Yes;
I do comprehend a great deal in it." |
Mr. Darcy. Though we can't know this until
much later, Darcy's upbringing has trapped him in a lonely egotism. His expecting so
much of an accomplished woman signals his fear that, though "suitable matches"
abound in the likes of Miss Bingley and Miss de Bourgh, he will never find a woman whose
mind and character will rescue him from loneliness. |
"Oh!
certainly," cried his faithful assistant, "no one can be really esteemed
accomplished, who does not greatly surpass what is usually met with. A woman must have a
thorough knowledge of music, singing, drawing, dancing, and the modern languages, to
deserve the word; and besides all this, she must possess a certain something in her air
and manner of walking, the tone of her voice, her address and expressions, or the word
will be but half deserved." |
Miss Bingley.
Picking up on Darcy's line of argument, Miss Bingley catalogues the desirable. While
certainly estimable, the characteristics she mentions tend toward producing a refined
style, not serious principles. One assumes
Bingleys sisters are accomplished according to the measures here voiced. |
"All
this she must possess," added Darcy, "and to all this she must yet add something
more substantial, in the improvement of her mind by extensive reading." |
Mr. Darcy. Darcy's expecting so much of
women is threatening for all the women present, of course. Darcy himself is
presumably an accomplished man - well educated and adept at masculine pursuits in the
field. His preferring substance over style explains his being bored by Caroline
Bingley. His expecting a woman to have mind explains his eventual choice of
mates. What is more, his mention of reading conveys his approval of |
"I
am no longer surprised at your knowing only six
accomplished women. I rather wonder now at your knowing any." |
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"Are
you so severe upon your own sex, as to doubt the possibility of all this?" |
Mr. Darcy. Darcy is the real feminist in
the room, thinking women capable of great seriousness. |
"I never saw such a woman, I never saw such capacity, and taste, and
application, and elegance, as you describe, united." |
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Mrs.
Hurst and Miss Bingley both cried out against the injustice of her implied doubt, and were
both protesting that they knew many women who answered this description, when Mr. Hurst
called them to order, with bitter complaints of their inattention to what was going
forward. As all conversation was thereby at an end, |
. . . but these women do. |
"Eliza
Bennet," said Miss Bingley, when the door was closed on her, "is one of those
young ladies who seek to recommend themselves to the other sex by undervaluing their own,
and with many men, I dare say, it succeeds. But, in my opinion, it is a paltry device, a
very mean art." |
Miss Bingley. She cannot resist another dig
at
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"Undoubtedly,"
replied Darcy, to whom this remark was chiefly addressed, "there is meanness in all the arts which ladies sometimes condescend
to employ for captivation. Whatever bears affinity to cunning is despicable." |
Mr. Darcy. Hee hee! It is
gratifying to see her get what she deserves. Austen knows this will furnish the
reader great pleasure, and it is important we like Darcy. Miss Bingley's wiles are
transparent (and tiresome) to Darcy. Once again, some careless readers miss the keen
edge of some of Austen's dialogue. Though ever so polite on the surface, Darcy's
remark is brutal. |
Miss
Bingley was not so entirely satisfied with this reply as to continue the subject. |
Austen often uses understatement to great effect. |
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January 06, 2005